The trouble with sales copy…

Posted November 12, 2008 by jmklug
Categories: action, audience, changing minds, communication, customers, focus, personality, presentation, sales

is that it’s easy to come up with something on your own.  It’s not like design, where you at least need to purchase software and surmount the learning curve before it’s even technically possible to get your bad ideas on paper and out to the public, oh no.  Anyone can write sales copy.

The question becomes:  What is that “sales” copy really saying?

If you’re like most who try, it becomes the same faceless drivel that we read and hear in local outlets; wanting for personality and lacking any real punch.  Name–>Product–>Price–>Location–>Phone Number–>”Buy Now” Push–>Repeat Contact Details for Good Measure

We hear from you how great you think your product or service is (imagine that!), but we get no reason why we should be coming to you for it . . . no sense that your business exists to serve people like me.  Why?  Because people are too worried about the “shotgun blast” style of marketing–set your eyes on as big a section of the population as possible and take your shot.

The problem with this, of course, is that in targeting everyone, we’re not reaching anyone!  It’s what makes goose hunting challenging–even when flocks of 1000+ are flying overhead.  It’s why feeder fish travel in those mind-numbing schools that confound would-be predators.  If you can’t target, you can’t connect.

So back to sales copy:  what can you do?  Write as if you’re having a casual conversation with your best customer–as if he/she will be the only person to read.  Surprise!–if he’s the type to buy your product, you want to reach more people just like him (same socio-economic background, same hobbies, same level of understanding of your industry (and comfort with its jargon).  You’re not trying to convert people who don’t care about your offering into buyers, you’re trying to reach out to particular individuals who are predisposed to want what you’ve got, and give them a nudge in your direction.  Once the momentum shifts toward you, it’s going to be easier to attract and accommodate the buyers you couldn’t have touched before.

Aim small, miss small.

Small Business Credit Crunch? Sales Cure All . . .

Posted September 30, 2008 by jmklug
Categories: action, focus, idea, inspiration, sales, simplicity

For all businesses (but especially for those of us who don’t measure profits in millions) access to capital is a constant concern.  Available credit is always going to be one way to navigate the lean times . . . but so often we neglect to see that, with foresight, we can keep ourselves from leaning on banks in the first place.

“Sales Cure All” is a commonly-used phrase in the small business community (I won’t site a source because I’ve heard it from so many).  A business’s cash flow has always been it’s top concern, but with the economic events (and non-events) of the past few critical weeks, it looks like available credit is going to become less and less so.

The good news is that self-reliance is why small business owners are small business owners in the first place–we’re not afraid to step out from under the protective but limiting umbrella of employment and drum up business for ourselves.

Case and point: the past few weeks have been insane for The Image Distillery (internally as well as outside the office) . . . I kept trying to figure out exactly what’s going to happen over the next few months, when it occurred to me: we need to keep pressing forward.

Put another way:  on the highway-crossing of life, you can either be the deer frozen in hi-beams or the one who makes a few quick leaps across to the other side.

It’s the hardest thing to do when things are uncertain, but when sales are the only thing that can deliver your business, increasing and refocusing your marketing budget is a giant leap in the right direction.

Political Barometer?

Posted September 12, 2008 by jmklug
Categories: Uncategorized

In case there was any doubt that we’re in the midst of a political firestorm, I submit this bit of news:  My three-year-old daughter is wandering around the house saying “Barack Obama Approved This Message”.

[Of course, anyone who has or knows a three-year-old knows it came out more like "Bark Boma Proodis Message", but I figured I'd translate]

I think it’s safe to say he’s a household name.

[in]formality

Posted September 10, 2008 by jmklug
Categories: audience, customers, experience, simplicity

There will always be a time and a place for the three-piece suit in business.  I just believe those times and places are becoming more and more rare . . .

Think of the last time you felt a positive connection with a brand [go ahead, I'll wait . . .]  I believe that at least 90% of the time, the brands that resonate with you are the ones that meet you on your level.  There are, of course, “aspirational” brands (Mercedes, Tag Heuer, Tommy Hilfiger at one time) which are catering to man’s desire to be perceived as elite beyond his current place in life.  But I’m talking about the bulk of products and services that aim to reach us as we are right now . . . cleaning products, fast food, retail outlets, et cetera.  Perhaps you’ve seen the Charmin Bathroom Tissue ad that addressed the issue of “leftover fragments” (this from an industry that softened the word “toilet paper” to the less-offensive “bathroom tissue” in the first place).

Even high-end consumer electronics like giant flat-panel TVs (certainly a status symbol in some right) are being marketed as gathering sites for friends and family–almost folksy.

Signage and labels are sounding less like legal jargon and more conversational.  In some cases, brands are even having fun within the legalese itself, like Apple’s “Do Not Eat iPod Shuffle” warning on the product page for the smallest music player in its line.

Is this really so surprising, though?  If we can think of a brand as a personality (which I think we can for our immediate purposes), who would you (as a consumer) rather do business with?  The guy who welcomes you with a handshake and a smile, or the stiff who’s too busy covering his liabilities to notice you walked through the door?

I think we can attribute this move toward informality to companies finally realizing this simple truth:  every communication they make has to convey their brand’s message.  And once you realize that, it’s easy to find a lot of touchpoints that can be made more welcoming . . .

The best time to plant a tree

Posted August 6, 2008 by jmklug
Categories: customers

I read this yesterday in one of the small business blogs to which I subscribe:

The best time to plant a tree was 40 years ago. The second best time is now.

Makes sense, doesn’t it? Most of us don’t want a tree–we want the beauty/shade it provides. The same goes with marketing; we don’t want the plan and top-notch creative–we want the business it brings in. (More cynical folks might say we don’t even want the business, we want the money the business brings)

If you’re not already planting your trees, it’s probably time to get your hands dirty.

It’s been too long . . .

Posted August 4, 2008 by jmklug
Categories: Uncategorized

Last post: March 18th. By my math, that’s nearly 5 months! What’s been going on? A lot actually . . .

In late March, I had the good fortune of being able to fill in for a client when their in-house graphics person left unexpectedly. That was 5 months ago, and they’re now by biggest and best client, entrusting The Image Distillery with a complete website redesign, consulting on and revamping their print campaign, and, most recently, breathing new life into their online search (watch for it this month . . . I’ll post more about that later). It’s a little crazy when you think about it–how much change one small opportunity can create in your life. Today’s lesson: keep your eyes open!

The last few moons have seen The Image Distillery grow in personnel as well (finally–I’m out of the home and into a real office–two actually!). tID now employs: a creative director/copywriter (me), an extremely talented engineer-turned-web-developer (his name is Doug, and he does amazing things with HTML and a dash of data), and the well-honed eye of our print designer, Casey (who also has an impressive photography portfolio). We keep things pretty informal (just ask any of our clients), but we still manage to turn out some solid work. Check out a few after-hours photos of the new digs . . .

It hasn’t been all sunshine and roses, though; before I brought on Doug and Casey I did manage to overextend myself, and it cost me a good client. Not something I would recommend, if you can help it. I should have been more realistic with my packed schedule, but I didn’t want to turn away the work. Let this be a lesson to any freelancers out there: if you can’t find the time to get a haircut, don’t take on a new client with a deadline. (You’re not doing anyone any good)

But with the team together now, I’m finally finding time to get caught up on some old projects, along with this blog. Writing has long been my creative outlet of choice, and, as Doug reminded me earlier today, everyone needs a pet project. It feels great, and I hope to keep it up . . . I hope you’ll prod me along if I fall behind!

Is “Good Enough” Really Enough?

Posted March 18, 2008 by jmklug
Categories: career, discretionary effort, emotion, employees, inspiration, passion, personal investment, project details, word of mouth

“Good enough.” How often do you hear these words around your workplace? I’ve been involved in several industries over my career, and I’m amazed at the ubiquity of this phrase. “Good enough, the client will never notice,” or “That’s fine, he never reads these closely anyway.”

The problem is, it’s absolutely true! A homeowner would almost never notice if the studs in their framing weren’t crowned properly. Most car owners would never know if the air filter was really replaced, or just knocked clean and reinserted. And, in most cases, what they don’t know really won’t hurt them in any significant way. (It’s sad to say, but absolutely true)

So why bother writing about this non-issue? Because, while that way of thinking might suffice for little things in the short-term, the “good enough” mentality never ends there. It seeps its way, slowly but surely, into our self-image and work culture. Slipping into the office at 8:07 becomes “almost on time.” Falling just short of production standards becomes “close enough.” To anyone who says that perfection is too costly, I posit that your business can’t afford “good enough.”

The best example I can give of the endless pursuit of perfection is my grandfather. He’s the kind of guy who, when he washes his car, looks under the hood to clean any residue off the engine block and neatly bundles his sparkplug wires. The words “good enough” aren’t in this man’s vocabulary. He once helped me with a cabinet I was making. After the “show” faces were sanded and varnished to a glossy sheen, and having a little extra time before the project was to be installed, my grandfather guided me to sand and paint the backside. Mind you, this was a cabinet, and a cabinet’s backside spends its days against a wall. No one else would ever notice the extra attention, but putting in that extra effort and knowing myself that it was there fundamentally changed the way I viewed effort and the way I approached projects.

“But self-satisfaction won’t pay the bills,” you say?

Discretionary effort—the extra work that one does because one chooses to, not because one must—is often the difference between a satisfactory product and an excellent one. In marketing, the difference between a “satisfactory” and an “excellent” product or brand experience is the difference between simply dodging complaints and actively creating customer evangelists—the kind who sing your praises every time your name (or industry) comes up in conversation. No business owner or salesperson needs to be told how valuable warm referrals can be.

Here are three takeaways to stomp out “good enough” in your workplace:

1) Work with people who give a damn. There is no hard and fast way to determine who does and who does not, but a good rule of thumb is this—determine how they define themselves. My grandfather is a car/yard/home kind of guy and pursues each of these to perfection. He is not a graphic design guy, and, as such, it doesn’t bother him that his business card could use some work. I, on the other hand, am a branding/construction/creativity guy (not into cars—you can tell by what I drive), so I would sooner get behind the wheel of a rust-bucket than desktop-print my business cards, or let just anyone speak/write on my behalf. When doling out projects, match people by what they care about first, their skill sets secondly (the skills will come, the extra-effort attitude won’t).

2) Give people time, tools & opportunity for discretionary effort. It doesn’t matter how much someone wants to try harder if they don’t have the time, authority or ability to go above-and-beyond. There are other ways for them to satisfy that “perfection” bug—but those other outlets won’t likely benefit your company.

3) Recognize the effort. I’m not just talking about bonuses…in fact, more money is probably one of the least-effective means to promote from-the-heart or self-defined effort. For example, the American Red Cross once dabbled with donor payment to get more needles in arms. The result? The experience was “cheapened” for donors who gave (literally & figuratively) out of the goodness of their hearts, and fewer people showed up. Find out why people tried harder or gave more, then reinforce that feeling or reasoning.


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